2016年2月11日星期四

Thesis statement+outline


Thesis statement: 

Both Lorenzo and Stitch understood how to love and care about others becuase of they recieved and understood the love from Olivia and Lilo, and they were not hematocryal monsters any more. That because the power of love can change people.

1.There is no absolute heinous people in the world, on one wants to always be alone and always be the "different types" in others' eyes. Everyone yearns for that someone could give a little piece of love to them, care about them and never give up them. They will have an amazing change. Olivia trusts Lorenzo and shares her feelings with him, and Lorenzo finally knows how to care about other people and actually does something to help others in Me and You; Lilo teaches Stitch the meaning of love and family, and she gives Stitch a family which he could feel warm and safe. At the end Stitch changes from a evil hematocryal monster in to an important member of Lilo's little sweet family in Lilo & Stitch. 

2. Love is a great mutual power. It could connect people's hearts and let them become closer. It definitely can change people, and it can change not only the person who is being loved but also change the person who is giving love to others.  In Me and You, not only Olivia changes beacuse of the help of Lorenzo, but also Lorenzo changes from a selfish boy who does not know how to love and how to get on well with others, into a reliable gentle man becuase he did many things to help Olivia, and this is his first time to do something for others; He experienced the feeling of being needed.  In Lilo & Stitch, Stitch changes from a evil hematocryal monster to a sensible helpful "pet" of Lilo's family because Lilo never give up him, and she always sees Stitch as a member of her family. Also, Lilo understands that she needs to be morewell-behaved, and she was no longer a naugthy stubborn girl becuase she understands the meaning of "family" deeper that before.

Outline:
1.Introductions+Thesis statement
2.body paragraph: How was Lorenzo acting before he met Olivia
                                  What did he actually feel instead of doing what he did. (might become a new                     paragraph)
3.   body paragraph: What did Olivia do which changed Lorenzo
4.   body paragraph: How was Stitch acting before he met Lilo
                                  What did he feel when Lilo tell him about the meaning of love and family (might become a new paragraph)
5.   body paragraph: What did Lilo do to change Stitch 
6.   Conclusion


Outline:
1.Introduction+Thesis statement
2.Body paragraph: How did Lorenzo act before he spent several days with Olivia
3.Body paragraph: How did Olivia act before she spent several days with Lorenzo.
4.Body paragraph: How did they change each other by spending several days together
5.Body paragraph: How did Stitch act before he met Lilo
6.Body paragraph: How did Lilo act before she met Stitch
7.Body paragraph: How did they change each other.
8.Conclusion 

Lorenzo provides Olivia place to live, tries to save her life when she was suffering of the drug addiction and takes care of her. He learnt how to love and care about other by doing those things for Olivia, and that also changes Olivia. She shares her true feelings with Lorenzo, helps him answer his mother's phone call, and promises him that she will not take drugs anymore.  Love helps those people understand that they are being needed or being cared about by others. Love does not unilateral exist. 


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